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You say you are unsure
I have to reassure you
You doubt your emotions
And I console you
I have to tell you
He loves you
I have to say it
And repeat it to you

And I hold back my emotions
Cause I know he loves you
Even if you're unsure

I hate myself for it
I betray myself for you
Don't you see?
No...you don't

My breast for thee it bleeds
And yet you are unkeen
And so must I wither
Thither and nigh
And mak'st my dais
Upon mine lies
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Thats... amazing. Really, really well done.

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.X.x. Scream Like No One's Listening .x.X.
This is both episodic and representative. Your dais, an original image. Nice, but there we have the bleeding breast. You know the images and metaphor I look for in your poetry is like those never written. Maybe this one is a bit too straight forward for me. Meh. I'm just into the whole code/context thing. But still, an interesting read.

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